SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

Transgender_Goddess 23 Sep 2020 22:26

Seeking Green lights: Yes!

Page type: SCP article

Elevator pitch- A thaumiel class sentient android that has traveled universes from a more advanced SCP foundation to a less advanced Foundation. However, their Device that allows them to travel universes has broken, leaving them stranded and unable to fully access their memory.

Central Narrative- It is a standard SCP file, describing containment and description with multiple Adendums. Further adendums reveal that SCP-xxxx has come from a universe that has managed to terminate or contain SCP'S that are dangerous, e.g. SCP-096, or SCP-3008.Final addendums reveal SCP-XXXX has originated from a universe where most Keter class SCP's have breached containment.

Attention grabber- SCP-xxxx was found inside SCP-2317-prime, out of power and highly damaged.

Re: SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

Pedagon 24 Sep 2020 02:33

Hey Transgender_Goddess!

Pedagon here from the Team of the Oinks! I'm here to be your critter!!

+ Roses

A thaumiel class sentient android that has traveled universes from a more advanced SCP foundation to a less advanced Foundation. However, their Device that allows them to travel universes has broken, leaving them stranded and unable to fully access their memory.

This is a great pitch and idea! I am instantly interested and want to know more!

+ Thorns 

Further adendums reveal that SCP-xxxx has come from a universe that has managed to terminate or contain SCP'S that are dangerous, e.g. SCP-096, or SCP-3008.Final addendums reveal SCP-XXXX has originated from a universe where most Keter class SCP's have breached containment.

This isn't necessarily an issue. But it makes me worry because many authors try to write articles that just become lists of trying the SCP with other SCPs and that isn't really an accepted style these days. Can you tell me more about what this aspect adds to your exploration of this android and how you are planning on making this aspect a part of your article?

Welcome to the site! I'm looking forward to hearing back from you! :)

-Brian

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Re: SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

Transgender_Goddess 24 Sep 2020 13:13

Hi! thank you for the response and feedback, I have taken this into account. I was never going to mentions the SCP's in question, but rather, make the data expunged and make any methods incomplete or missing due to her broken travel device and memory. I will mention one SCP- (TBD) but not a method of termination.

However, in the last addendum, I would explore where she came from and the life she had, I would also reveal that she has a synthetic brain, which would explain why she cannot fix herself. She would also attempt to interact with SCP-5067- Nuclear memory!

Please tell me what you think! also… do I need one or two greenlights to be able to create a sandbox article?

Re: SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

Mikaelious 24 Sep 2020 20:04

You can create a sandbox article any time you want, but to use the Draft Critique forum, you need two greenlights.

Re: SCP-xxxx: The traveler (Seeking Green lights)

Transgender_Goddess 24 Sep 2020 20:49

Okay, thank you very much! And, what do you think?