SCP-J

Summary:

An idea about scp-j :3

SCP-J

KirQ 21 Sep 2020 15:08

Seeking Greenlights: No

Page Type: Joke SCP

Elevator Pitch: A pillow that’s cool on both sides

Central Narrative: I think the story is about an memetic SCP-J that make everyone lost their mind and want to have it. Also, it maybe have humorous conversation in Addendum and in Description as well.

Hook/Attention-Grabber: A pillow that’s cool on both sides

Additional Notes: I hope my idea doesn't similar to any articles that have already existed. If there are something like this, pls let me know.

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-Kir-

Last edited on 21 Sep 2020 15:46 by KirQ Show more

Re: SCP-J

Researcher Omicron 21 Sep 2020 15:29

An SCP is an anomaly doesn't matter if it is a joke SCP, I don't get how a pillow being cool is an anomaly, you may also want to get a central narrative before the critters get here, also additional notes are more about things describing the SCP not saying you don't want your article to be plagiarism, and if there are other people just recommending a pillow that is "Cool on both sides" then I will be a bit concerned.

Re: SCP-J

Riemann 21 Sep 2020 15:40

This is a single sentence. Giving feedback isn't a race - you can stop and take a moment to elaborate on these points here.

Re: SCP-J

Researcher Omicron 21 Sep 2020 15:43

I wasn't trying to race I was just trying to type that fast so I could make lunch.

Re: SCP-J

Riemann 21 Sep 2020 15:36

Hook/Attention-Grabber: A pillow that’s cool on both sides

All comedy is subjective, and moreover is largely down to execution. I don't think this is a bad starting place, but it's difficult to say whether or not this will be effective. I can see a couple paths that I'd take, but I'm curious how you would proceed on this.

If you could give us more information, about how you're going to set up the joke and lead to the punchline, that'd be for the best. That way we have a better idea of how you'll tackle this.

Re: SCP-J

KirQ 21 Sep 2020 15:51

umm, thanks for the reply :D. It kinda hard for me right now to summarize it. Maybe I should try have to some drafts first.

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-Kir-

Re: SCP-J

Pedagon 22 Sep 2020 03:02

Hey! Pedagon here from Team of the Oinks!!

I saw your reply to Riemann and drafting is not the way to go at this point. Before you put a bunch of time drafting and working through it you should put effort into figuring out what these will be:

Also, it maybe have humorous conversation in Addendum and in Description as well.

You have a simple anomaly so these are where you will find your path taking shape.

Remember that a -j gets treated just as critically, or more so, as a normal article. Putting the time in at this stage will get you to the drafting soon enough

-Brian

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