Writing a storyline for Randomini's CW4 Series and need some fresh eyes on an early story draft!
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Hello, SCP Wiki!
I have recently begun the drafting process for a long storyline to fit into the new CW4 canon, featuring several of the characters from the original Cool War series. I've already had Randomini himself look over the piece in regards to characterization and he said I did a pretty good job. However, I would love a fresh set of eyes unfamiliar with the original story.
How does the characterization/motivation of Pico Wilson feel? Is he an interesting character? Are the formatting shifts of the tale working to its benefit or making it hard to follow?
You can find this tale under the tab "Hey Baby, How's It Hanging?" on http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/thehouseofballoons.
Thank you so much for the help!
