SCP-Bla Bla Bla-E-Girl

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SCP-Bla Bla Bla-E-Girl

SErichenuff 04 May 2020 21:57

Seeking Greenlights: Yes

Page Type: SCP Article,

Genre (Optional): Horror, Comedy,

Elevator Pitch: IN A WORLD WERE E-GIRLS ARE HORRIBLE MONSTERS THAT CHARM MEN ONLINE TO CONSUME THEIR SOULS

Central Narrative: The story follows a typical SCP Article format about how E-Girls are actually shapeshifting monsters from another dimension who steal the souls of people, ethier by meeting them directly in public or online.

Hook/Attention-Grabber: Idk man, I just think the idea of Belle Delphine consuming the men and simps she is attracting online for nutrients/energy would be interesting.

Additional Notes: I know this SCP article seems stupid, but message me if you curious on more what I ment.

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SErichenuff 04 May 2020 22:04

Belle Delphine: UWU OWO

Agent Jackson: Dear god ma'am, can you please just reply to our questions?

Agent Jackson: Okay I'm going to ask you one more time, can you please tell me what happened to *Clears Throat, Daddyfeetmonster479? *Whispers Dear god Daniels, what are we doing?
Belle Delphine: UWU *NOTICES YOUR BULGY WOLGY, WHAT'S THIS?

*The sound of ripping flesh and clothing is heard

Agent Jackson: Dear god! What is that?! F$ck Open Fire! Open Fire! *Screaming

I hate myself.

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RockTeethMothEyes 04 May 2020 22:34

SErichenuff, do not double post comments on threads. It's considered spam and clutters the forum. If you must make changes to your idea, use the edit function located under "Options" at the bottom right of each post.

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While I'm here, I can confidently say that this concept is juvenile at best and misogynist at worst. The excerpt you've provided in your double post is painful to read in the regard that its impossible to take seriously, relying on an overdone meme (that doesn't even apply to e-girls, frankly). As a modern application of a succubus, I don't buy it.

I know this SCP article seems stupid, but message me if you curious on more what I ment.

I will not.

I don't think this concept is a worthy pursuit. I suggest trying something else.

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sindar_helge 05 May 2020 13:18

I wholeheartedly agree.

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SErichenuff 05 May 2020 20:41

Ah, but that is the wholehearted reason I am misogynistic. Every SCP Idea I have ever made or thought of is apparently horrible and stupid, or its not 'what people are looking for.' And there is a reason I put THIS ARTICLE IS STUPID. I just thought I would try one idea I have left.

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Tuomey Tombstone 05 May 2020 20:52

Just to be clear here… You say are being sexist on purpose because you received negative feedback about other articles?

1. Why would that make you decide to be sexist?

2. Why do you think being sexist would lead to a good response?

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Dr Arkelao 05 May 2020 21:05

I don’t usually use the term “sexist” because it is used too much this days and very few appropriately, so I wont say it because it doesn’t apply. What I will say is that is very stupid. Acid comedy has to be done very good and has to be very intelligent. However, the base idea is not bad, and maybe if you give it a little thought it could be a very good SCP. I don’t know, maybe is a species consistent of only females that needs males from other species to reproduce, and only during sex, and that kills the male, that the newborn uses for food. Feel free to use this if you like. I’m pretty noob at this, so maybe I am wrong.

Cheers!

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ProcyonLotor 05 May 2020 21:22

Ah, but that is the wholehearted reason I am misogynistic

Fuck off, buddy.

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