Mikell Bright's Insights?

Summary:

Something on the Bright Family.

Mikell Bright's Insights?

SilkyFurry 05 Mar 2020 23:18

Okay, so let me start with Sorry to AdminBright who made the Bright family and their history if ya don't want me writing about my [kinda] cannon on it I'll just leave it be. Idk if you're ever going to see this but I'd hate to bother you with a useless pm.

Seeking Greenlight: Yes/Maybe

Page Type: Tale

Central Narrative: Mikell the eldest of the Bright family siblings is talking with his then-wife {When he's an 05 but only a few years in} on why she feels he's more distant than usual and what's eating him up inside.

Hook: {I mean; if I say it kinda loses its bite} His wife is an scp and he'd only found out just recently despite having suspicious and he this is the last time he gets to see/hold her.

Notes:
Okay so this may just be me but I feel like despite the 05's being all secret and such they do still kind of have lives {i.e. wives/husbands/children and such but said people know nothing about their job obviously and are always away on business.}
I would also like to note that this is on the earlier side the start of the Unnumbed Brood so she and her kid would both be anomalous. This family can't catch a break, can they?

Please let me know what you think of this idea as a whole I enjoy the idea of it but I'd be the author lol so that'd make me bias.

Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

MalyceGraves 06 Mar 2020 15:31

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Personally? I'm over the endless tales about Bright and the "usual suspects". There are lots and lots, and their lives have been explored from countless angles and through endless filters. I realize they're really liked, but there is far far more to this site than just the usual.

Folded for mobile users ->

Wow me with something original. But the "oh, my love, I love you, but our love cannot be, for you, my love, are an scp, and they'll lock my love away" has been done too many times for me to care.

That being said, if you want to write about the O5's, feel free. Hell, I'd even be interested in hearing more about the lengths one of them goes through to "hide" his/her/its work from their family. Are they masquerading as a Gov. official? An executive in some high-powered multinational?

Or, let's give it a twist, their cover story is that they're just a lowly international courier, and they've got to jet off at a moment's notice.

Or, take it a step further, and they have no "alternate" life. They had to give it all up to become an O5. Arguably one of the most powerful people in the world, and they don't get to have a life so other people can.

There are so many ways to take this, but please don't take it in a direction we've already seen a thousand times.

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Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

SilkyFurry 07 Mar 2020 05:14

Geez the mobile friendly version seemed much nicer.
Also I do want to write more about the 05's just as of yet…and well obviously reasons no one knows who many of them are name wise as least.

I get it's been done a million times but ya sound a touch aggressive imo but thank you for the feedback. On a side note I do know it's over done but hey it's enjoyed to an extent otherwise it wouldn't be a troope.

Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

AdminBright 06 Mar 2020 22:01

While I don't mind it, I don't think that it fits with Mikell currently. There is no canon, yada yada yada, but with the whole storyline around David, I feel like it would be more interesting if she WASN'T Anomalous, and having to deal with that type of thing.

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Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

SilkyFurry 07 Mar 2020 05:22

Well if it's isn't the man of the hour himself, color me genuinely delighted didn't think you'd take your time out for someone or something so small.

Anyway what sounds like my bootlicking aside; mean David and anyone he's with would be interesting. I'd ask you to go into his personality a bit but I feel like that'd be asking to much. I'll see how I can spin it I mean is there another one you'd might recommend I write on? I'd like to get a kind of sense for his relationship with everyone.

Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

AdminBright 07 Mar 2020 05:28

Feel free to write on your own, whether about existing character,s or new ones! I always tell people they are free to make their own Brights, the family is huge.

And yes, one about his wife trying to deal witht he stranger shit her husband brings home, or just talks about? That would be interesting. Just being another anamolous Bright, married to a family of oddities? Not as interesting, I think, persoanlly.

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Re: Mikell Bright's Insights?

v0idPlayer 06 Mar 2020 23:13

What's with people always picking on Dr. Bright and his family? Sure Dr. Bright is a bit wacky at times, but why not pick on Dr. Helden? Why not more on Dr. Gears and his family?

Makes me feel sad for him.
- v0id

Forum Crit Staff - Operational Staff Post

Naepic 07 Mar 2020 02:34

v0idPlayer, this feedback is not very helpful.

Nitpicking about who the focus of the article is on is not particularly helpful, especially when no other crit is given. Please be more conscientious in the future.