Night Night...
First tab of my sandbox.
The summary says it all. Also, here's the article outline (SPOILERS).
Concerns (past and present):
- Class: I've heard debate over if it's really a Ticon or not.
- Name: This thing doesn't speak a set language; it just uses the language of whoever it's latched onto. However, it is ALWAYS able to understand its own name: Thera. How do I realistically justify this name for interviews? Should I?
- Description: It's a lot of weird details that I need included, so I don't want some element in it becoming a mess.
- Pacing: I've had many people misunderstand key information in the article due to weird pacing.
- Dialogue: The article is HEAVY with it, so I need all the support for it I can get.
- Picture: Non-photo pictures are normally frowned upon, but no other options would be available. Should I have ANY kind of picture?
Note: if you're sent a link here from IRC, I politely request that you "crit as you go." I.e. if you read a section in the article that you want to critique, do it as soon as you can instead of saving it for one giant crit at the end.
THANK YOU! This is a long draft to be honest, so any time you can offer would be greatly appreciated!
