The Undead doctor. [Requesting Greenlight]

Summary:

A doctor from Site-19 that supposedly died, but still walks.

The Undead doctor. [Requesting Greenlight]

Rho-9 Agent H 07 Nov 2019 18:02

A Doctor from Site-19, who was involved in an accident and, through anomalous means, became a dead, yet walking, SCP. The SCP has been in multiple suicide attempts, and trusts most site 19 staff, except for Clef.

I don't know if this is a good first idea, but it is a start. I also have a plan for a canon contribution if this gets greenlit.

I might do more details on this, as well as a name for it.

I have a draft planned, I will publish it if needed.

Greenlight no longer needed, I'm changing around the plans.

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It is time to leave the darkness, regardless of what the higher-ups say about retirement. We must not be left out of the light, for what might we become in our isolation?

Last edited on 19 Nov 2019 17:23 by Rho-9 Agent H Show more

Re: The Undead doctor. [Requesting Greenlight]

Rho-9 Agent H 08 Nov 2019 17:42

Placeholder, fell to page 5.

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It is time to leave the darkness, regardless of what the higher-ups say about retirement. We must not be left out of the light, for what might we become in our isolation?

Forum Criticism Team - Junior Staff Post

gee0765 08 Nov 2019 17:44

Rho-9 Agent H, please do not bump threads. It is spammy and unfair to other users who are patiently awaiting criticism. If you make major edits to your idea or draft, then you may bump the thread by announcing these changes, but contentless posts like this are explicitly against the Forum Guidelines.

Please be patient. It often takes 1-3 days for staff to review an idea or draft, and we prioritize drafts with no comments that have fallen beyond the first page. If you would like additional critique, it is always an option to send a PM asking for help to a member of the Butterfly Squad with a link to this forum thread, or to ask for help in the IRC chat.

Last edited on 08 Nov 2019 17:44 by gee0765 Show more

Admin Post - Info - Open

Zyn 09 Nov 2019 06:53

As a general note, a "placeholder" refers to a reviewer stating that they have committed to reviewing an idea or draft, but currently do not have the time. So they are holding their place in the critique queue, until they are able to provide the full review.

Please do not attempt to use "placeholder" as a thread bump, which is considered spam and not allowed.

Re: The Undead doctor. [Requesting Greenlight]

Naepic 07 Nov 2019 22:01

This is a very, very basic idea that I'm not quite sure would even work out as a Series 1 SCP. The casual reference to suicide attempts as well as trusting everyone but Clef which really leads me to believe this is little more than a lolFoundation piece.

Furthermore, this is compounded by the absence of a narrative that might have salvaged this and while I strongly recommend checking out the Guides and Essays tab on the sidebar for more resources, I also recommend trying out a different idea as this rides on a very generic concept of reanimation, tackles some sensitive topics rather hamfistedly, and seems to be riding on the coattails of a well known character to work.

Last edited on 10 Nov 2019 04:00 by Naepic Show more