OK so the draft doesn't make any sense to me, In the future I would plug it into grammerly or get a friend to read over it. But from what I can gather from the summery Its some guy with a mask that when killed by someone absorbs there killers abilities? ( it that right)
Ok so here the problem I see with this!
The main scp anomaly is when he dies, it absorbs an important skill of his killer
Why do people or things want to kill this guy? You act like this happens very often so why do people kill him? Is there something about him that makes people want to kill him?
it absorbs an important skill of his killer and respawn in his body after 5 hours fully healed.
What do you mean by important Skills? Is it regale people that kill him or other anomalies?
What's the significance of the mask it's brought up several times and it doesn't seem to contribute to the story? I looked at the draft but I couldn't understand any part of it that was relevant to the mask.
If your going to write a humanoid you have to have a emotional hook to your SCP because right know I have not emotion connection to this SCP. I highly recommend reading this http://www.scp-wiki.net/how-to-write-an-scp.
Good luck!
