The Templar Incident / Discussion

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Jacob Conwell 26 May 2015 19:13

Thus continues the tale of Agent Navarro and the dastardly Jericho T. Hill. This is the fourth tale in a series that I have come to call "Burnt Bridges." Its fitting that a tale series about a character invented by TwistedGears would be alliterated.

I think this means I have used the character more than TG has himself, but its honestly a very fun character to write, so I digress.

Special thanks to Dr. Leonard, TwistedGears, Goomy, Decibelle, and Lotor for their assistance editing this.

Hope you enjoy the installment. Mmmm'yep.

TwistedGears 27 May 2015 05:14

It's really cool to see Navarro's development in this series, and like I've said before you do a good job writing him. I had originally envisioned him as a chill dude trying to make the best of a bad situation, and putting the bad situation(s) into different perspectives like this has given a lot of cool depth to the character.

Regardless of however much attention these tales get I'm really glad you did this, and I look forward to the rest.

Jacob Conwell 27 May 2015 22:19

Means a lot to hear that TG. When I first stumbled across Agent Navarro in the context of the Alphabet series there seemed like a lot of cool background to the character, so its really cool to have your seal of approval in expanding on that.

Agent Navarro is best agent. Doesn't afraid of anything.

Dr Lonewolf 29 Jun 2015 14:34

Jacob, I'm so sorry these haven't gotten the exposure they deserve. Your dialogue is fluid and natural, your situations are quite clever, and there's always a surprise from left field somewhere. I just finished reading these and the Peregrine arc in one swell foop.

Agent Navarro is best agent. Doesn't afraid of anything.

All my +1 are belong to you. More??

Edit: /me claps while bouncing up and down

Last edited on 04 Jul 2015 05:44 by Dr Lonewolf Show more

Jacob Conwell 04 Jul 2015 05:31

Glad to see that you are a fan.

To answer your question, this series will have one more tale and a hub page.
So yes, there will be more.

Would suggest editing

Tsar Erwin 08 Oct 2015 17:59

“why the hell is does this statue look like you?”
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Wat?

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Tsar Erwin the First.

Re: Would suggest editing

Jacob Conwell 08 Oct 2015 18:55

Fixed