Not bad a'tall.
However if the Agent thinks that's bad, whoo, he's in for a shock.
Admin, SCP Wiki
Not bad a'tall.
However if the Agent thinks that's bad, whoo, he's in for a shock.
Admin, SCP Wiki
Is it just me, or does this kind of remind you of Hotel California by the Eagles?
What's the line… "you can check out any time you like, but you can never leave…"
More like California's unsaid policy of taking anyone who comes to Hollywood to get famous, screwing them up and spitting them out.
Not so much Hotel California as The Truman Show for me. Not sure why…
My first SCP I read.
"Welcome to the foundation"
That kept me here.
EDIT: All right, never mind the first bit.
I like this one.
Unless you consider the fact that most of them are numbed-down, emotionless sociopaths capable of reacting to any dangerous situation in a calm and logical manner, yes, that note would be odd. But there is no canon.
That's not a fact at all, and needn't be considered.
In universe, O5s would be the only ones reading every SCP.
Hence why the abundance of their notes, while overused, is logical.
This…is really creepy, and really really good. Upvoted.
The lack of reason causes me tow downvote.
Really? They didn't even try to determine why its citizens are missing persons? What happens if one moves there? What information you would get by interrogating someone who lives there?
Its a hollow shell, I think it would fit better if modified into a tale.
I like it, but the use of the author avatar is unnecessary, and the last note, while kind of amusing, is also unnecessary. It'd be just as good, if not better, to have it end on the Agent asking for a pay raise.
if your reading this your gay
I dont know, the flow seems kind of odd, the length is appropriate but for some reason I feel like the origonal document is too short and the addendum should be a seperate page…
Oh well, either way I like this one alot, never liked small towns, thanks Silent Hill.