holy damn, youve turned experiment logs into a fucking artform
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D-10984 did not preform ritual and removed back from wall during step 3. D-10984 has been terminated.
Typically, "terminated" is used when the Foundation purposefully kills someone, rather than an something else killing them. It may have only been me that was caught off guard by this, though.
You use preform where I believe you want perform. Both are correct spellings, so spell check wouldn't pick up on it being a problem, but they mean very different things.
Take this +1 for an entertaining read
Says "ritual type: 4" should be 5 sorry for nit picking
Edit: I'm a noob and nervous about editing at the moment, should I just edit this myself? The newbie guide says yes, but I'm still a little uncomfortable about it
For spelling and grammar and that sort of thing, you can edit an article. If it's a major change, you should run it by the author (where a minor change becomes major can be subjective. If you're not sure, there's no harm in double checking with the author). In this case, I'd say that's probably a fine change to make.
Due to the current unpredictable nature of SCP-2105 and of a Summoning Ritual possibly resulting in a XK class end-of-the-world scenario, Dr. Marberry is joining me in observation of Experiment-2105-α4. ["We can never be too careful." -O5-█]
Am I the only person who found this very funny? And then the O5's comment after the fact, as well….
A few errors I noticed: D-993 is referred to with male pronouns until it's mentioned that she's a woman. Also, D-990 is described as a "tall, diminuitive man," but tall and diminuitive are antonyms. Very good, aside from these errors.
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